diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
index b995371c10..5a3901d9c5 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
@@ -3451,8 +3451,8 @@
Usually, information about the hardware can tell you what image
format the device requires.
Should your device require multiple partitions on an SD card, flash,
- or an HDD, you can use the OpenEmbedded Image Creator
- to create the properly partitioned image.
+ or an HDD, you can use the OpenEmbedded Image Creator,
+ wic, to create the properly partitioned image.
@@ -3463,7 +3463,7 @@
specified either directly on the command-line or as one of a
selection of canned .wks files as shown
with the wic list images command in the
- "Using a Provided Kickstart File"
+ "Using an Existing Kickstart File"
section.
When applied to a given set of build artifacts, the result is an
image or set of images that can be directly written onto media and
@@ -3533,9 +3533,9 @@
Requirements
- In order to use the wic utility with the
- OpenEmbedded Build system, you need to meet the following
- requirements:
+ In order to use the wic utility
+ with the OpenEmbedded Build system, your system needs
+ to meet the following requirements:
The Linux distribution on your
development host must support the Yocto Project.
@@ -3555,14 +3555,17 @@
system.
- Have the build artifacts already available.
- You must already have created an image using the
+ You need to have the build artifacts already
+ available, which typically means that you must
+ have already created an image using the
Openembedded build system (e.g.
- core-image-minimal.
- It might seem redundant to generate an image in order
- to create an image using wic,
- but the artifacts are needed and they are generated
- with the build system.
+ core-image-minimal).
+ It might seem redundant to generate an image in
+ order to create an image using
+ wic, but in the current
+ version wic, the artifacts
+ are needed in the form generated by the build
+ system.
You must have sourced one of the build environment
setup scripts (i.e.
@@ -3613,8 +3616,8 @@
- You can find more out about the images
- wic creates using the provided
+ You can find out more about the images
+ wic creates using the existing
kickstart files with the following form of the command:
$ wic list <image> help
@@ -3669,7 +3672,7 @@
image_name.wks
An an OpenEmbedded kickstart file. You can provide
your own custom file or use a file from a set of
- provided files as described by further options.
+ existing files as described by further options.
-o OUTDIR, --outdir=OUTDIR
The name of a directory in which to create image.
@@ -3743,19 +3746,19 @@
- Using a Provided Kickstart File
+ Using an Existing Kickstart File
If you do not want to create your own
- .wks file, you can use a provided
- file.
+ .wks file, you can use an existing
+ file provided by the wic installation.
Use the following command to list the available files:
$ wic list images
directdisk Create a 'pcbios' direct disk image
mkefidisk Create an EFI disk image
- When you use a provided file, you do not have to use the
+ When you use an existing file, you do not have to use the
.wks extension.
Here is an example in Raw Mode that uses the
directdisk file:
@@ -3799,7 +3802,7 @@
- Generate an Image using a Provided Kickstart File
+ Generate an Image using an Existing Kickstart File
This example runs in Cooked Mode and uses the
@@ -3826,7 +3829,7 @@
This example shows the easiest way to create an image
by running in Cooked Mode and using the
- -e option with a provided kickstart
+ -e option with an existing kickstart
file.
All that is necessary is to specify the image used to
generate the artifacts.
@@ -3879,7 +3882,7 @@
As mentioned earlier, you can use the command
wic list images to show the list
- of provided kickstart files.
+ of existing kickstart files.
The directory in which these files reside is
scripts/lib/image/canned-wks/
located in the
@@ -4199,15 +4202,21 @@
- Following is a listing of the commands, their syntax, and
- meanings.
- The commands are based on the Fedora kickstart documentation
- but with modifications to reflect wic
- capabilities.
-
- http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda/Kickstart#part_or_partition
- http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda/Kickstart#bootloader
-
+ The following is a list of the commands, their syntax,
+ and meanings.
+ The commands are based on the Fedora
+ kickstart documentation but with modifications to
+ reflect wic capabilities.
+ You can see the original documentation for those commands
+ at the following links:
+
+
+ http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda/Kickstart#part_or_partition
+
+
+ http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Anaconda/Kickstart#bootloader
+
+
@@ -4323,8 +4332,8 @@
--active:
Marks the partition as active.--align (in KBytes):
- This option is specific to the Meego Image
- Creator (mic) that says to start a partition on an
+ This option is a wic-specific
+ option that says to start a partition on an
x KBytes boundary.
@@ -4358,7 +4367,7 @@
--append:
Specifies kernel parameters.
- These will be added to the syslinux
+ These parameters will be added to the syslinux
APPEND or
grub kernel command line.