overview-manual: Review feedback applied

Minor wordings based on Stephano's feedback.

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Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
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<para>
The Yocto Project team maintains complete source repositories for all
Yocto Project files at
<ulink url='&YOCTO_GIT_URL;/cgit/cgit.cgi'></ulink>.
<ulink url='&YOCTO_GIT_URL;'></ulink>.
This web-based source code browser is organized into categories by
function such as IDE Plugins, Matchbox, Poky, Yocto Linux Kernel, and
so forth.

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Project provides advantages in both systems and applications
development, archival and management benefits, and customizations
used for speed, footprint, and memory utilization.
The project is a standard when it comes to delivering hardware
support and software stacks, allowing software configuration
and build interchange, and build and support customizations for
multiple hardware platforms and software stacks that can be
maintained and scaled.
The project is a standard when it comes to delivering embedded
software stacks.
The project allows software customizations and build interchange
for multiple hardware platforms as well as software stacks that
can be maintained and scaled.
</para>
<para id='yp-key-dev-elements'>
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and quality assurance (QA).
By using the public AutoBuilder, anyone can determine
the status of the current "master" branch of Poky.
</para>
<note>
AutoBuilder is based on
<ulink url='https://buildbot.net/'>buildbot</ulink>.
</note></para>
<para>A goal of the Yocto Project is to lead the
open source industry with a project that automates